Date: August 03, 2009 11:39:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
omg r u SERIOUS!!!! this is really good!!! i like how you added and changed up the dream. and the detail that u used madeit seem more like if i was watching a movie rather than just reading. and that's a good thing if the reader can visulize what is going on in the story.
can't wait for the update!