Date: September 25, 2010 7:03:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
I liked your story. The only problem I had was at the end when Darien was having his little "flashes" of reality. There it was really choppy and kind of jumped too much for my liking with nothing to place it all together. But otherwise I greatly enjoyed your story.
Date: August 13, 2010 1:12:06 PM Title: Chapter 33
I really enjoyed this story!!! YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!!! my sister had to come in and tell me to go to bed, but i was severely jet legged so...i was sneaky and kept reading. muahahaha! Seriously, i really, REALLY liked your story. Keep writing!